Nature's Eternal Religion: New 2015 Edition Edit

[Nigel]

I hear you on that one brother! Had me out for a week

I am happy to proofread etc, and as you have rightly said, after 12 years of hearing everyone's opinion, you are best placed to do what needs to be done.

[Chuck]

I am really excited about this project. Bravo!

   

[Rev.Cambeul]

Book I is now complete and ready for proof reading.

Do not confuse the book's American English with British English. I do not care if Founder Klassen used a mixture of British and American English, the entire book is now consistently American English.

Barring any unforeseen catastrophe, Book II should be complete by the end of the week and ready for proof reading. After which, a new cover will be designed.

@Cailen.

[Chuck]

On page 311, the paragraph on loyalty and love, it reads: 'its never- ending program'. The hyphen needs joining with ending.

[Chuck]

The chapter 'Manifest Destiny', on the first page, 322, is littered with errors. There are gaps between paragraphs, and new paragraphs beginning mid sentence...
    'Our doctored history books have given us so much trash about the importance of the Pilgrim Fathers, the Puritans, the Mayflower Compact, and in general, the role of Christianity in the building of America. Our school children and the American population, by and large, as a result, have now become so indoctrinated that practically all of them will rehash this Jewish distortion that America was built by Christians, for Christians, and on Christian (new line)
    principles. A closer examination of history will show that America was built not by Christians, nor on Christian principles, but, on the contrary, was built despite the shackles of Christianity.'
I trust this will be corrected.

[Chuck]

Come on, people, post as many errors as you can find. You cannot be too pedantic!