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Re: Nature's Eternal Religion: New 2015 Edition Edit
« Reply #35 on: 14 May 2015 at 21:36 »
final corrections NER pages 400- 468
1. page 417 4th paragraph should be " unravelling of further events"
2. page 420 unnecessary gap between paragraphs 7 and 8.
3.page 427 end of 4th paragraph should be " -that is perfectly alright"
4. page 432 unnecessary gap between paragraphs 3 and 4.
5. page 447. 4th paragraph should be "and the calibre of her men."
6. page 451 last paragraph should say " as the Jews do to Germany,"
7. page 457 paragraph 4 should be "build meeting houses"
8. page 463 3rd paragraph should say " we will find the average White man or woman as being tall, athletic in build and unusually healthy in mind and body. The average man will be handsome and manly looking,
9. page 465 paragraph 2 should be "colored races for it to carry warfare against."
10.page 467 paragraph 1 should say "music , art and sculpture"


That's my input anyway so I can't complain. Thanks to everyone who has offered corrections and PM Cailens hard administrative work. Many heads and minds are better than one and future generations will thank us for this small effort in preserving the Holy word and  helping bring that word of salvation to our people. Rahowa!
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Re: Nature's Eternal Religion: New 2015 Edition Edit
« Reply #36 on: 22 May 2015 at 21:58 »
All noted. All I have to do is some work for White Nations Forum http://whitenations.com I'm moving their website to the same servers we use. And then I can begin work again on NER.

Thanks for the efforts. If anyone finds any more errors, don't hesitate to mention them here. And the same goes for any NOTES that anyone think should be added to the text of the book.

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Re: Nature's Eternal Religion: New 2015 Edition Edit
« Reply #37 on: 03 June 2015 at 23:56 »
I have been meticulously going through each chapter, and going by the following errors found in a single chapter, there is a lot of work to be done.


Chapter 17: A Closer look at the Judeo-Christian Hoax


Page 180, lines 3/4, says ‘one lay parlayed upon another’; should read ‘one lie parlayed upon another’

Page 180, line 5, says ‘and endless chain’; should read ‘an endless chain’.

Page 180, line 5, says ‘average person is confused’; should say ‘average person is *so* confused’. Compare with First & Second Edition.

Page 180, line 6, says ‘that his is psychologically browbeaten’; should say ‘that *he* is psychologically browbeaten’.

Page 180, line 22, says ‘more that 100,000 changes’; should say ‘more *than* 100,000 changes’.

Page 180, fourth line from bottom, it says ’teen-ager’ with hyphen. This seeming error appears in both First and Second Edition.

Page 181, line one, says ‘were these people’; should say ‘*why* were these people’.

Page 181, line 6, it has ‘who wrote it: In the beginning’. In the First Edition there is a full stop after ‘who wrote it’ and a new paragraph begins. In the Second Edition it has a colon, but again a new paragraph begins. Worth considering.

Page 181, line 22, says ‘more sense to be taken in’; should say ‘more sense *than* to be taken in’.

Page 181, line 25, says ‘Lord’s whole place’; should say ‘Lord’s whole *plan*’.

182, line 11, says ‘2,348 B.C.’ with a comma after the 2, which doesn’t appear in original.

182, line 19, says ‘2,348 B.C.’ with a comma after the 2, which doesn’t appear in original.

182, line 27, says ‘far beyond *the* 2,348’; should say ‘far beyond 2348’, again, minus the comma after 2.

183, line 3, says ‘a *s* group of perfidious cutthroats,’ with superfluous ’s’; should say ‘a group of perfidious cutthroats,’.

183, lines 18/19, says ‘and the milky way’; First Edition says ‘and the constellations’.

183, line 29, says ‘he died for own sins’; should say ‘he died for *our* sins’.

183, line 30, says ‘It is something as if for an instance’, with superfluous ‘an’; should say ‘It is something as if for instance’.

183, 2nd line from bottom, says ‘2,000’ with a comma after the 2, which doesn’t appear in original.

184, line 1, says ‘to save mankind”’ without the double inverted comma before ‘to’. Should read ‘“to save mankind”’.

184, line 9, says ‘in conflict with each other,’ with a comma instead of full stop. Should say ‘in conflict with each other.

184, line 10, it says ‘not the laws of light’; should say ‘*nor* the laws of light’.

184, line 11, says ‘or he laws of magnetism’; First Edition says ‘*nor the* laws of magnetism’.

184, line 21, says ‘never did believe in Christ’; whereas the First Edition reads: ‘never did believe this story and they never did believe in Christ.’ Words in bold missing from PDF.

184, line 25, says ‘why would the Jew’s be God’s chosen people’ with apostrophe in the highlighted word; should read ‘why would the Jews be God’s chosen people’.

184, last line, says ‘overwhelming about Jews’; should say ‘overwhelmingly about Jews’.

185, line 1, says ‘of God’s impregnating’; First Edition says ‘of God impregnating’.

185, line 18, says ‘on average’; First Edition says ‘on *the* average’.

185, line 25, after ‘praising the Lord?’ the paragraph ends. Whereas in the First Edition it continues all the way to ‘Jewish network of lies’ (line 32).

185, lines 27/28, says ‘with the bible telling us most of us are going to go to hell anyway’; First Edition reads ‘with the bible telling us most of us are going to hell anyway’.

(I notice that in the PDF we see ‘per cent’ spelled both ‘per cent’ (British English) and ‘percent’ (US English). In the First Edition, Klassen consistently opts for the British ‘per cent’. Whatever is decided upon, it must be consistent throughout.)

185, seventh line from bottom, says ‘terrorizing the minds of his victims’; should say ‘terrorizing the minds of *its* victims’.

186, line 30, say ‘take it all as “the Gospel truth.’ without double inverted commas after ’truth’. Should read: ‘take it all as “the Gospel truth”.

186, line 32, says ‘would mean between going to heaven’; should say, according to First Edition, ‘would mean the difference between going to heaven’.

186, 4th line from bottom, says ‘then the least thing I could do’ with superfluous ‘thing’ that does not appear in First Edition. Should read: ‘then the least I could do’.

187, line 8, after ‘breaks down miserably.’ it immediately goes to a new paragraph, which isn’t the case in the First Edition.

187, line 16, says ‘We have no evidence whatsoever that’ and immediately skips to a new paragraph.

188, line 22, says ‘incompatible worlds the world of reality’, minus a necessary long hyphen. Should read ‘incompatible worlds the world of reality’.

189, line 14, the number 2000 has a comma after the 2 (‘2,000’), whereas the First Edition does not. This is a common occurrence throughout the PDF. As with ‘per cent/percent’, whatever is decided upon, whatever is most correct and appropriate, it must be consistent throughout.

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Re: Nature's Eternal Religion: New 2015 Edition Edit
« Reply #38 on: 04 June 2015 at 18:44 »
Errors Chapter 18: The Talmud

191, lines 6/7/8, it reads very differently from the First Edition. The PDF reads ‘the Old Testament that they pursue, look to for guidance, but by this time they have a completed a thorough study and indoctrination course of the Talmud. It is their real Bible.’ with all the words highlighted different from the First Edition. The First Edition reads as follows: ‘it is not the Old Testament that they pursue, but instead they begin a thorough study of the Talmud.’ Please compare with First Edition.

191, line 10, says ‘he also received interpretations of it’; First Edition reads ‘he also received *oral* interpretations of it’.

191, line 23, says ‘it is well know’; should say ‘it is well known’.

191, line 24, says  ‘in which “sacred: Jewish’ (with colon in ’sacred’); should say ‘in which “sacred” Jewish’.

192, line 17, says ‘collected into,’; should say, according to First Edition, ‘collected into one,’.

192, line 22, after ‘the world’ it should have a full stop. Should read ‘the world.’ Then we have more omissions from the First Edition. After ‘the world’ (which should be followed by a full stop) it says ‘with all its wealth, the enslavement of all peoples.’ This omits a total of 12 words. The sentence should read as follows: ‘It sets forth the historical aim of Jewish control of the world with all its wealth, the enslavement of all peoples.’

192, second to last line, says ‘It also deals the different kinds of oaths’; should say ‘It also deals with different kinds of oaths’.

193, line 3, says ‘much of its tremendously’; should say ‘much of it is tremendously’.

193, line 10, say ‘important that the’; should say ‘important *than* the’.

194, line 20, says ‘perpetuated’; where the First Edition says ‘perpetrated’.

194, 9th line from bottom, there is a quote from a Rabbi Chanina that appears to needs commas between quotes. These comments, for whatever reason, do not appear in the First Edition either.

195, line one, says ‘in to court’; First Edition says ‘into court’.

195, line 7, says ‘the question further by what kind of war’ minus a long hyphen after ‘further’ (that appears in First Edition). Should read: ‘the question further by what kind of war’.

195, line 8, says ‘used against Esau by deceit’ minus a long hyphen after ‘Esau’ (that appears in First Edition). Should read: ‘used against Esau by deceit’.
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Re: Nature's Eternal Religion: New 2015 Edition Edit
« Reply #39 on: 25 February 2019 at 19:07 »
Bump!

    
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